Wow. I can't believ I missed this on ff.net. This is simply gorgeous. The whole cutting/breaking apart and knitting back together thing that you have working through the whole thing is fantastic, it ties the whole piece together without being too heavy. And some of the sentences are just beautiful. I particularly loved
"Three years is more than enough time to stop hating someone, and if it's enough for that, it's got to be enough time to stop loving her, too"
and
"This isn't-- Look. We're not going to be friends again. This was just...so the last time we saw each other wouldn't be the last time we saw each other."
Guh. This is why in many ways I hope we don't get proper closure on the show, because much as I'm going to firebomb NBC if it doesn't happen, they will never be able to produce anything this raw and emotionally truthful. Loved it.
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Date: 2008-06-11 09:16 pm (UTC)"Three years is more than enough time to stop hating someone, and if it's enough for that, it's got to be enough time to stop loving her, too"
and
"This isn't-- Look. We're not going to be friends again. This was just...so the last time we saw each other wouldn't be the last time we saw each other."
Guh. This is why in many ways I hope we don't get proper closure on the show, because much as I'm going to firebomb NBC if it doesn't happen, they will never be able to produce anything this raw and emotionally truthful. Loved it.